Reading Reviews for At the End
  
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Review #1, by TheKikGeek Pain then Bliss
23rd October 2011:
I like it, but I think it is too rushed. Try to add more details to lengthen it. You know what I mean? The idea that one minute, lily hates james, and the next, she is dating him is a little confusing. Good start, though!

Author's Response: Ya I know the beginning is a bit rushed, but I really wasn't sure how to start it, I have a really great plan for the middle and end, I just have to get there:) I planned out the entire story based on one of the final scenes which just kind of came to me. Thanks for the review!
Fawkes

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Review #2, by Annabel Pain then Bliss
23rd October 2011:
This is so good I love it

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

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