Oh. My. Gosh! That was AMAZING! I am dying for more! Please update soon! :)

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I loved it! You really need to post another one soon! I am dying here! ;)

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Brilliant story so far! Such a new and refreshing plot. But you're beginning to annoy me with the deathgulper winning all the time! I also found it hard to believe that this one jerk would be able to take 2 of the 3 members of the Golden Trio! How about giving the good guys a win, eh!

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You big bully! Picking on poor little James! If I was those deathmunchers I'd be alot more worried about Ginny catching them than Harry! Just don't leave us dangling too long for the next chapter! (p.s. I believe Yaxley is acutally a guy).

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Oh wow. Poor hormone-driven Hermione... So not insane... Not in the least. Ok, maybe just a little. Anyway, good chapter! Can't wait for the next update.
~potterlover19355

Author's Response: Haha, thanks. :) Yea, not in the least... Sorry it's took so long to update. My computer crashed so I've just been stealing my sisters lately... The next chapter is being validated, and the one after that is already written. Just bear with me! :) You rock, thanks for the review!!

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Very nice first chapter, but i would like to point out you have put 'defiantly' as apposed to 'definitely'.

Author's Response: Oh, yea. Sorry about that, I never have been that good of a speller :). I tried to fix it, so I guess I'll have to wait for it to be validated. Thanks alot, glad you liked it!

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By the way, sorry about the funky space between the first two paragraphs. I tried to fix it, but it won't stay >:(

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Good but i didnt really understand chapter 3

Author's Response: It is actually the point of view in the enemies mind. It is showing what's going on in Cethin's mind. It will all make sense later on, especially after the fourth and fifth chapter.

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GREAT but it should be longer

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Too short needs an intro

Author's Response: Yea, it seems longer when you write it. I went back and rewrote the whole chapter but it is still a little short. I didn't like it too much either, so I hope you like the new chapter better :)

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A very intriguing start, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and get the new chapter up as soon as I can. Glad you liked it!

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I usually like to have at least 2 chapters before I decide to review a story and you didn't disappoint! This one has gripped me from the start! I assume CFT is Travers! I am surprised a deathgulper would still be on the lamb by this point in your timeline! Will be looking forward to future chapters! You are off to a great start!

Author's Response: Thanks bunches! Im glad you liked it! I started to get inspired to take on a more humerous plot so I kinda changed it up a little.

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