Hi. I loved your story.
First of all, you write well. And you got the characters down pretty good.
I love how Ron had calmed down as he grew and excepted the fact that he and Hermione were going to be together forever. And therefore, marriage was inevitable. And I love how happy he was to become a father.
All together a very delightful story.
Look forward to more of yours.
Good job.Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a pleasant surprise to open my page, not expecting anything, and see this. :)
I am so glad you enjoyed it. It means so much!
If you liked it, please check out my other stories! :) Report Review
very heartfelt i love itAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks so much!! :) Report Review
This was such a cute fic. I thought you caught Ron's character very well.Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!
This really means a lot to me because Ron is definitely one of my favorite characters.
Thanks for the review!! :) Report Review
Cute! I just LOVE Ron in this chapter!!! This chapter seems good in Hermione's POV!!! I wonder what it would be like in ROn's POV...
10/10 and adding to favs!Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Haha, are you suggesting I should do it in Ron's POV? Maybee :P
Thank youu! :) Report Review
This story has a lot of potentional, and I really like how you Ron and hermoine interacting with each other. And I think you nailed Ron's reaction to hermoine being pregnant!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :) Report Review
Cute story. Though Id always thought Hermione would be more of a... conventional reason to get married.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I see what you mean, but I thought it was cute, so I wrote it anyways :p Report Review
Cute story - I really enjoyed it. I think you wrote them just right!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed, and also glad to know you think I wrote them perfectly - it was what I was aiming for! :) Report Review
aww.. thats so sweet.. you're brilliant in making readers smile :)
whats up with Ronald's Diary?? i cant wait to read the next chap
and go on with the idea of one shots.. i l8ve one shotsAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! That made ME smile, haha.
It'll be up soon, I'm working on it :D
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