That was a great story!!! :) Report Review
A nice chapter of all the usual stuff. Of course the four had to be in Gryffindor to enable the story to remain in character. 10/10 and plz update soon.Author's Response: i'll get right to updating it once my stupid homework is done Report Review
Another good chapter. You have a good strong concept for the written word.
I loved it when Remus punched Lucius like that. Made me want to cheer. 10/10 and moving on.Author's Response: Remus punching Lucius was my favourite part of the chapter too. I think it shows he can be just as tough as Sirius and James. Report Review
I had to smile when Remus was doing his victory dance around the house.
Another good chapter and 9/10. Plz update soon.
By the way, the letter I by itself is a capital letter all the time. And not just at the beginning of a sentence.Author's Response: thanks for the support and i hope you like my next chapter Report Review
A nice start to your story. I read so few stories about how Remus joined Hogwarts. 9/10 for your start and i look forward to reading more.
Though do watch your spelling. You've missed a few letters out. For example buterbeer has two t's in it.
Adding to favs so plz update soon. Report Review
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