This story is AWESOME! I want in on the plot! One thing:
“Don’t even try to fight me, boy, or you will die here and now!” He growled and I dropped the stick, deciding that being dead was worse than being a werewolf.
If he wanted to die, then why did he drop the stick if Greyback said he would kill him if he didn't drop the stick?Author's Response: Thanks! :D By the way, this is Mike, the writer of the chapter responds.
Ermmm... Sorry but I want to keep that confidential. Once NaNo is over a chapter SHOULD come out... By Christmas...
It's Greyback, and Lou didn't want to die? I didn't write him like that did I? I don't think so.
Mike. THANKS! :D Report Review
This story is awesome so far! It's really deep (and pulling me in aahh!) I love it so far! On to the next chapter!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! :) I'm really happy you like it!!! :D
-LL, Lunar or June :D Report Review
Really, really good chapter.
It made me want to cry, him getting attacked, and this sentence "I cried as began to slowly back up against a tree, the last tree I would touch as a human." That was just so sad!
Also, I dunno if it was meant to be there, but when you said "Her bright *Insert color of her eyes XD here* eyes were clouded, and bloodshot." I dunno if that was a mistake... but!
That was a really, really good chapter, and so sad.
I feel so bad for the little boy ):
I hope the next chapter comes up soon!
10/10Author's Response: First about the insert eye color here... That's a mistake because I put the unedited chapter up... The edited (Aka the one with like one grammar thing, and this changed) will be up in a couple days... For now laugh at me XD
I'm SO SO SO SO SO glad you like the chapter I wrote! :D
I'm also really glad I wrote angst well, although I'm not great at humor.
I'm super glad you are liking this story! I'm chuckling, yes chucking, at this review. :D
Mike, Mihali1432, Slightly Normal Werewolf Addict. Report Review
That brought tears to my eyes.
I got chills in the beginning as well.
The ending was so emotional, like, I'm crying right now.
I feel so bad, he is six, and then she thinks it's totally her fault, that is just so sad ):
Really, really good beginning chapter though! I really, really want to read more (:
10/10Author's Response: WOW!! I wasn't expecting such an... emotional and touching review!
Your making me all happy now!!
The second chapter will be in the queue as soon as I'm finished responding! (It's by Mihali1432)
(This one was by me (As in LunarLuna)
And I can promise you chapter two is amazing. And I have`n't read chapter 3 yet, but i can feel the awesomeness from here!
Thank's again for reviewing!!
-LunarLuna Report Review
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