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Review #1, by CypressQueen The Proposal

30th May 2012:
Hi,

This is a really sweet story. I really enjoyed reading it. The only thing was that you could maybe flesh it out a bit more - add some more description. It was a bit confusing reading it as you didn't have a break or anything between each scene. But overall it was really wellwritten.

CypressQueen.

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Review #2, by slytherinchica08 The Proposal

17th October 2011:
What a short and sweet oneshot about a character who is very little ever portrayed. I love the idea that she found love and that both her and her boyfriend made it through the war and were able to have their happy ending that so many were not able to have. I think this was a good oneshot though I feel that it could have used some more description such as what did he look like, what did she look like, stuff like that. I feel bad for him since she kinda already knew that he was preparing to ask her to marry him because I think I would want to be surprised by it. But this was really a sweet piece and I loved that it was about people who aren't featured in Harry Potter much. Great Job.

~Happy Halloween~
~Slytherinchica08~

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