Please please write more soon!! Report Review
Aw, SUCH an amazing chapter! Update soon! Report Review
You can't stop like that! Love the story and can't wait for the next chapter!! Report Review
Love this story! Your Remus character is so cute:) Update soon. Love BearAuthor's Response: thank you! the next chapter is pending validation. :) -becky Report Review
I've only just found this story tonight, and I absolutely love it. This may not be a big review, but I just wanted you to know that you should be proud of your work as an Author. :)Author's Response: this is such a lovely review! thank you so much, i really appreciate it :) -becky Report Review
Good chapter :) I liked the letter from her dad: Very interesting and I can't wait to find out what he did! For the time being, though, it's a great subplot and something to speculate about. I liked the girls joking around when they were sitting by the lake - it was funny and completely reminds me of my own friends... :P And the boys' prank-related mathematical genius made me giggle - I could completely see them doing a survey like that! I liked the scene with Sirius - it's cute how bent he is on discovering who the girl is :)Author's Response: Thanks very much! :) -becky Report Review
whootwhoot!! loved it and cant wait for when she reads her leader and has her fisrt tuter session, lovely upload :) cant wait for moreAuthor's Response: thanks a lot! :) -becky Report Review
Long chapter! But that's good :) Let's see... I love Fliss! And Remus, of course :] I just want him to fix Ophie so she'll stop starving herself! I look forward to seeing the tutoring sessions with Regulus - that will be interesting...Author's Response: Haha I know, this one is very long. I did think about breaking it up but I couldn't really find a cut-off point. Ah well. That's actually a part of the old version, this new version doesn't have that particular element in it, her starving herself. That's the part I had to edit out because the staff hid it. Thank you for reviewing :) -becky Report Review
Good first chapter :) I like all the characters and how you've portrayed them, whether original or canon. Great banter between them, too - it makes it interesting to read. Looking forward to reading more soon!Author's Response: thank you! :) -becky Report Review
i love the story so far and cant wait for more :)Author's Response: thanks very much! :) -becky Report Review
I really like it so far! I love how she's best friends with Remus - somehow that doesn't come up a lot - and I like how she has secrets, that she's not the typical I-Have-such-a-hard-life-so-pity-me character you sometimes see. I also like how it's not too cliché - not at all, really, except for maybe the James being Head Boy part. So, love it so far! Please update soon?Author's Response: Thanks so much! Like I said in the description for the first chapter (at least I think I did) I have about 12 chapters of this story written, but staff hid it. I was having a lot of trouble getting them to un-hide it but in the end it was a lot of hassle and just decided to make a new one. When each chapter's finished I'll put another one up so you don't have to wait too long. Thanks again :) -becky Report Review
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