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Review #1, by killjoy You Were Mine First

24th May 2012:
Uhhh I have to disagree with Rose here.Scorpius didn't break her heart,she NEVER gave it too him.He tried to get her to date him but she ignored it till he started dating someone else and than she gets jealous.Sorry but not feeling sorry for her here LOL

Author's Response: Well, in actuality your heart can break after you think you had someone wrapped around your finger and they run of with someone else. I'm not saying that Scorpius broke Rose's heart, she was distraught and was taking everything very seriously; worst-case-scenario type thing. I understand that you don't feel sorry for her, but sometimes things are over dramatized, when you realize something like that. If you read my author's note, this is like what happened to me. He didn't break my heart, I chose to have it broken. But this is sort of a personal story, so I'm sorry you didn't like it.
Thanks for dropping a review, even if it was just criticism. I appreciate what you said and it makes me look at it differently, but I can't really change it...Anyway, still, thanks for the review! Every review counts and means a lot:)

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Review #2, by Cheyenne You Were Mine First

19th December 2011:
You should make this into a short story because it is really good :)

Author's Response: Really? Thanks so much:) I'll definitely think about it!

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Review #3, by sophie_elle_malfoy You Were Mine First

28th October 2011:
I loved you story. I read it and I cried. I read it to my friends and they cried. And I'm thoroughly sorry to know that this was what happened to you.
I hope you find someone like 'him' or even better :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's the best review I could get:) And thanks for the sympathy, I'm glad you liked it:)

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Review #4, by mrsphantom You Were Mine First

27th October 2011:
Oh, I hope you add to this. This story has such potential. Please keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I don't what I'll do, right now I can't think of anything to add because I basically put down all my personal feelings and I can't think of anything else...but I could expand, it would be a great idea:) Thanks for the review:)

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Review #5, by liz You Were Mine First

25th October 2011:
i love this! you should write a companion to this story. another one-shot maybe a year or two into the future just to show where they end up. would scorpius still be with taryn? or would rose/scoprius get together in the end?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! That's a good idea...I was actually thinking of doing that:) And I don't know what I would do in the end, it'll be a surprise:)

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