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Review #1, by MyMyMiss Lost and then found

7th March 2014:
Hi hun, here from the black out.

I really enjoyed reading this , not only because it was dramione but because I think you held up the slightly ooc very well. A lot of people tend to really stray away from their ooc, and take it too far, but you played it just nicely and it was beautifully written - I didn't see the kid coming, but I instantly knew it was Draco's child, and i love the bunny transformation, that was sooo cute!

You have a very well written story here hun, the only thing I would say is perhaps go through it with an open mind and a fine tooth comb, as there are a few spelling errors here and there, but apart from that, it's a beautiful story and you should be proud!!

~mmm

-blackout battle round 2.

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Review #2, by adluvshp Lost and then found

27th July 2012:
Here for Pass the parcel.

Lol, this was a cute fic. It was a little cliche, but well cliche is the middle name of Dramione. I am a Dramione fan myself and I enjoyed reading it. If you could fix the formatting issues (spacing) it would be a more pleasant read though =)
Rest, I liked the fic. Perhaps you could have given a little more insight into Draco and Hermione's past and relationship development, it would have been a nice addition to the fic. Draco's son was very cutely written and made me smile. The plot lacked a little substance though, and I would have liked more detail.
However, apart from that, you wrote this quite nicely. Good effort, there is surely room for improvement!

I hope I wasn't too harsh!

7/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: AditiDraco95,

Wow, I forget this story is even on here. This was my first attempt at a one-shot. I hope I can expand my one-shot abilities from this point.

I have such issues with spacing on this site. I think I have almost figured it out.

Thank you for the review.

Megthechef43 aka Meg


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Review #3, by atellam Lost and then found

26th April 2012:
Hey there :) Here with your reviews from the Reviewing Competition, and thought I'd give your one-shot some love :)

First up, this was cute. I'm not really a Dramione shipper, but I still liked this. I'd work on the spacing though. There are giant gaps between each paragraph and it interrupts the flow when I have to scroll so far to see the next paragraph.

I'd also change the bit at the beginning where Draco refers to Harry and Ron as 'Potty' and 'Weasel'. I think that while he might refer to them by their last name, I think if Draco's a father now, he'd need to be more mature than that.

The dialogue seems a little forced in places, but it's not too bad, so don't stress.

Other than that, I enjoyed this a lot, and the idea was very cute. Keep up the good work, and I'll get on your other review soon :)

- Adele :)

Author's Response: Adele,

Well, thank you for reviewing my one-shot. I've almost forgotten about it. I wrote it pretty early in my writing. (though I consider what I write now as early but I know I've grow a fraction of an inch as a writer so far.)

I have the worst time working with the spacing on HPFF. I've tried to correct this many times so if you have some pointers they would be very helpful.

I will have to go back and read my work. I understand where you are coming from by stating Draco probably wouldn't use Potty and Weasel as nicknames. It's a bad habit I have as a writer wehn thinking from Draco's pov.

Thanks,

Megthechef43


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Review #4, by Sairahi Lost and then found

25th January 2012:
Awe!
I had to check you out, since you wrote such an awesome review. Your story was really cute. Kick tush. Can't wait to read your other one.
~S

Author's Response: Thank you for seeking me out. This story was just a quick little idea I had but I have the novel i'm working on so I didn't embellish too much. Maybe I will come back to it later.

Thank you for the review.

Megthechef43

P.S I can't waiting to read more on how Harry saves Ron. Plus the Dramione part of the story too. :)


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Review #5, by confusedlover Lost and then found

24th November 2011:
very lovely.

aw...this was so cute and sweet!! i enjoyed this story very much. keep up the great writing!! (:

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like the story.

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