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Review #1, by MyMyMiss Lost and then found

7th March 2014:
Hi hun, here from the black out.

I really enjoyed reading this , not only because it was dramione but because I think you held up the slightly ooc very well. A lot of people tend to really stray away from their ooc, and take it too far, but you played it just nicely and it was beautifully written - I didn't see the kid coming, but I instantly knew it was Draco's child, and i love the bunny transformation, that was sooo cute!

You have a very well written story here hun, the only thing I would say is perhaps go through it with an open mind and a fine tooth comb, as there are a few spelling errors here and there, but apart from that, it's a beautiful story and you should be proud!!


-blackout battle round 2.

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Review #2, by adluvshp Lost and then found

27th July 2012:
Here for Pass the parcel.

Lol, this was a cute fic. It was a little cliche, but well cliche is the middle name of Dramione. I am a Dramione fan myself and I enjoyed reading it. If you could fix the formatting issues (spacing) it would be a more pleasant read though =)
Rest, I liked the fic. Perhaps you could have given a little more insight into Draco and Hermione's past and relationship development, it would have been a nice addition to the fic. Draco's son was very cutely written and made me smile. The plot lacked a little substance though, and I would have liked more detail.
However, apart from that, you wrote this quite nicely. Good effort, there is surely room for improvement!

I hope I wasn't too harsh!



Author's Response: AditiDraco95,

Wow, I forget this story is even on here. This was my first attempt at a one-shot. I hope I can expand my one-shot abilities from this point.

I have such issues with spacing on this site. I think I have almost figured it out.

Thank you for the review.

Megthechef43 aka Meg

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Review #3, by Sairahi Lost and then found

25th January 2012:
I had to check you out, since you wrote such an awesome review. Your story was really cute. Kick tush. Can't wait to read your other one.

Author's Response: Thank you for seeking me out. This story was just a quick little idea I had but I have the novel i'm working on so I didn't embellish too much. Maybe I will come back to it later.

Thank you for the review.


P.S I can't waiting to read more on how Harry saves Ron. Plus the Dramione part of the story too. :)

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Review #4, by confusedlover Lost and then found

24th November 2011:
very lovely.

aw...this was so cute and sweet!! i enjoyed this story very much. keep up the great writing!! (:

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like the story.

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