This is a very interesting story!
I really like how you set an air of mystery with these two chapters and at the same time, how you manage to create a light atmosphere; just teenagers at Hogwarts, and yet a threat is coming.
I also like your characterization of Rose: it's fun to read her thoughts:D
You should write more of this! Report Review
Oh i liked this!! :D
I'm thinking Rose should probably swear off drinking though. haha Can't wait to read more!!Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I know right? Oh Rose, she's a silly one ;) But thanks for your review, I'll definitely update soon! x Report Review
interesting, i like it. do you want a banner for this story? i notice your just starting out so you probably dont have a dark arts account. if you want i can make you a banner. email me at sa_in_the_usa@hotmail(dot)com if you want, if not, cant wait for the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: Aw, that's such a sweet offer, I'll definitely email you! Haha, this review made my day, thank you! x Report Review
i rather like it, its an odd idea, but it works, i cant wait to see where it goesAuthor's Response: Haha, it is! And thanks for the review! (: Report Review
this chapter was really good :)Author's Response: Aw thank you! :) Report Review
Ugh oh! Looks like Rose got herself into some trouble. I really like this, keep up the great work & update soon. :DAuthor's Response: Haha, you know Rose, she's a little bit of a disaster magnet ;)
But thanks so much for your review, I'll make sure to update ASAP :) x Report Review
Really liked this story, looking forward to next chapter. Love the plot so far and Rose, keep it up :)Author's Response: Aw thank you! Haha, I'll make sure to post the next chapter up, and thanks for reviewing(: x Report Review
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