Loved it- but you could really expand on this, you know? Even though you labeled it a "one-shot". But maybe you knew this already. ;)Author's Response: Thank you so much, I think I actually might! I'm quite busy at the moment and working on another story, but maybe next week or so, nearby Christmas I'll post a sequel :) Report Review
this was so tragic and bittersweet! i loved it, and feel such pity for both Draco and Hermione. it's too bad that they couldn't make it last. wonderful job though. keep up the fantastic writing!!Author's Response: I'm glad you thought that, I really wanted the ending to be tragic and bittersweet because I really always found it unrealistic when Draco and Hermione ends up happily together- I just can't picture it. Whenever I write a story about Draco & Hermione, only one word comes up: Angst. But then again, my other story, isn't like that is it? But anyway, thanks so much! :) Report Review
I really like this... lol Well, wasn't that constructive? I just like how Draco really wanted Hermione to see that he still loved her but she was with Ron and didn't care because she was better off without him and then we see that she wanted him too but she couldn't have him. So sad :(Author's Response: Yes, that's kind of the quick summary to explain it. Thank you so much ! I appreciate it :) Report Review
What a sad and bittersweet oneshot! I loved that this was from Draco's pov and I really think you did a good job with his heart breaking. I love that which each number he counted there would be a flashback/memory that showed us a bit of their relationship. I feel bad that he stood outside the door counting down and yet she never turned around to look at him. I was willing it in my mind that she would turn around to face him and for Hermione and Draco to have their happily ever after but it never happend. The ending was so bittersweet with Hermione realizing who was there and wanting nothing more then to go out to him but instead she decides to forget that it ever happend and continues on with her happy life with Ron.
I love how you have Blaise and Pansy included in this oneshot as well. It's nice to see Draco's relationship with his friends and that they are friends to him not just followers. There were a few spots that it seemed like two people were talking so it wasn't clear who was actually talking because it would start off as one person and then it would be another person. But other then that it was really great! Great Job!
~Slytherinchica08~Author's Response: Finally gotten to replying to this - first of all, thank you so much, and I am so happy that you liked it! I really like Dramione fics when they're quite bittersweet and has lots and lots of angst. Their relationship is quite like Romeo and Juliette for me so I rarely write/read stories with a happy ending for them. I just can't imagine it! Anyway, yeah, I wanted to change it up a bit so Draco can have a bit of friends haha! Oh and yes, I just read it again - it is quite confusing. :S oh well, thank you again! Report Review
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