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Review #1, by rj_sunshine Thundering Fear

10th January 2012:
This is a great story. I love how it is from Michael's perspective because it's so sweet and innocent.
The results from the challenge will be up soon in the Hall of Fame and in a blog :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'll be waiting for the results. :)


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Review #2, by Cleopatraa Thundering Fear

27th October 2011:
Okay I liked the fact you wrote about a small child, for a second I thought Fenrir Greyback was his dad and Iím glad he isnít. He doesnít seem a great father figure to me. You really could feel the fear he had. But Iím confused did he found out his dad is a werewolf because of a dream? If he is a seer I can understand but if he isnít why does he believe in his dream. Also nice writing style!
-Trick or Treat from Slytherin House

Author's Response: Nahh Fenrir is my other OC's "dad" :P
Hmmm Seer or not, all will be explained at some point.

I've had a few dreams myself where the stuff in them HAS happened, or hinted towards things so that's where some of my inspiration was taken from. When I was younger I believed some of my dreams.

Also he clued stuff together, like why his mom takes the pictures of his dad down every month (I hope I included this and I didn't delete it).

Thanks :D Glad you like my writing style, it's improved greatly since I first started and this is one of my favorite stories that I've written!


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Review #3, by Goldemort Thundering Fear

14th October 2011:
This was really good, and gave Michael lots of character development. =)

Author's Response: Thanks :D All reviews make me happy!


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Review #4, by BKL8008 Thundering Fear

14th October 2011:
I think it gives Michael a lot of character development, and is a pretty good capture of a child's fear of a certain thing. I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :D I'm glad it gives him character development, and I captured a child's fear well.



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