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This was a very sweet chapter, and very sad. You did well emphasizing that although dying isn't terrible for them, it's still sad knowing their leaving behind their son.
It was a little hard getting used to how the story reads, I think it'd be good to point out you can read it backwards or forwards so it warns readers it can be different without getting them a little confused.
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I get so teary eyed when I read stories about Tonks and Remus. I wish they hadn't died.
Using them was a good idea; leaving Teddy could very well have been their unfinished business. I think we were the only one's to use them.
Loved it so much. And, reading your A/N, that's an interesting idea. I could never do that. Well done.
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