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Review #1, by lightningninja Lets Have Babies

8th January 2012:
wherever did you come up with alice? she's priceless! =D excellent chapter my dearie =)))

Author's Response: oh, well, you know...sometimes things just come to you! ps hows dick johnson?

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Review #2, by SydneyBlack Lets Have Babies

7th January 2012:
Haha! Oh my god the last part where it says "I hate volemort, you hate voldemort, let's have babies". That cracked me up! XD Let's have babies, where did you get that from?!!?! o_O

Author's Response: since Alice is in St. Mungos for the entire series, i figured i would base her off of one of my friends, even though she isn't an oc...the friend that i based her off of said that at lunch one day (the whole part about voldemort not being pureblood and making babies) so i figured i would use that...so glad you liked it!

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Review #3, by Fawkes_the_Pheonix My first raid

7th January 2012:
I like the idea of the story, but there were a lot of spelling errors like: Evans, Sirius, Felicis, etc. I like the idea of the story however and hope you continue it. It just needs some spelling edits.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! and I'm terrible at spelling so I'm kind of expecting that sort of comment, but I'm working on it! Keep reading!

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Review #4, by ms4aisa My first raid

23rd December 2011:
I really liked this chapter! :) good work! :)
but just one thing: you've got some mistakes like Serious instead of Sirius and Slitherin instead of Slytherin... hope you don't mind me pointing them out...:/
as I said, interesting story, already looking forward to the next chapter :)
Merry Christmas! (if you celebrate it ;) )

Author's Response: thank you so much! and i know about the spelling errors, i have terrible spelling :( but i'm so glad you liked it! i was kind of nerveous about doing a first generation ff because you know that they all die in the end, but i'm really happy that people are actually reading it! Merry Christmas to you to!


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