Hi, it's me reviewing the entries to the challenge.
Thanks for your entry. This was great, Bill/Fleur are a great pairing and you did a great job with them. I loved the clash of Fleur who is so cultured and expecting high class French cuisine, and Bill, who is more down to earth and not at all into rich stuff. They were really opposites attract, and the ending, with the proposal was so sweet. No criticisms. Results will be up soon.Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for getting around to reading this, honestly, I had actually forgotten that I entered your competition *hides*
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AW! This was so cute, I loved the characterzations. You make them seem so perfect for each other. Maybe you'll write a novel on them?
Please. :)Author's Response: Thank you! Bill/Fluer are one of the only canon shippings that I ship :D Maybe I will. ARGH! Now I want to write a novel! I can't have any more WIPs! haha, I'm sure a novel will come out soon now haha.
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Hi there! Here for the review tag thread ^_^
This was a really sweet idea. I love you made the moment after such a chaotic scene in Harry Potter so lighthearted, which is exactly how I think Bill and Fleur would have handled it. You captured their personalities really well, and their banter was really sweet. This piece made me smile in the end :)
One thing I would suggest is getting a beta for this. There were quite a few spelling/grammar errors that can distract from the story, so it would make it even better if you get those polished up :)
Overall, I'm glad I read this! It was a really sweet story, keep up the amazing work! ^_^Author's Response: Yay for the review tag!
Thank you! I always shipped Bill/Fluer; I loved the innocence of their relationship and I tried to put that across. Thank you!
Yeah, I wrote this story a while back and my grammar was great so I'll go over and edit it one day; I'll also get one of my beta's to read it :D
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Hey its me from the forums!
Okay, so first off...I never read a Bill/Fleur story. I've always stayed on the 'familiar' ships. And Bill/Fleur isn't one of them ,for me that is. However that does not stop me from liking your story and enjoying it.
The flow was really great, I easily pictured the whole thing :D But I did notice that you should use more words for your descriptions to actually deliver the emotion you want to the reader. I find your story simple yet quality. 8 out of 10
CloakAuror9 xxAuthor's Response: thank you for reviewing the story, this has been helpful :) and okay. I'm not the best person in the world at description but I think(hope) i'm getting better :)
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