i'm loving this story, and im really wantnig to know what happens when he gos off to hogwarts! bet he'll make loads of trouble ;) the butterfly scene was well written :) xoxAuthor's Response: Thank you! Yeah, quite a few things will happen to Teddy while he's at Hogwarts ;) and I'm glad you liked the butterfly scene! xx Report Review
aww this is really sweet. i can just picture vic, she seems so beautiful! you descibed her well. looking forward to reading more :) xoxAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you like her :) and the story! I will update as soon as I can! x Report Review
Oh my goodness, I love your writing. You are really good at inserting emotion into the storyline. I can't wait until the next update! Just make it quicker this time ;)
-nednednedAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you like it! haha yeah I wrote this for when i wanted a break from my other stories, but I'll try and make it quicker! Thanks for the review :) x Report Review
This is such a beautiful story!
Very few fics which start with Vic and Teddy as children are so good and so well-thought; usually those chapters are used only as a background to the story. But, you, here- you make this a real part of your story. You show their characters, you show who they are and what kind of children they are. And what's the most important factor of all, is that you present them as children with childish thoughts and behaviors.
I really liked this small chapter, and I honestly hope you'll keep writing this. It's very promising!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it :) I will keep writing as much as possible, even though this story was intended as a kind of a break from my other ones. But showing their relationship from when they were little is really important to me, because to me that's what changes the future!
Anyway, thanks for reviewing! x Report Review
Loved it! Keep up the great work!Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad you liked it :) xxx Report Review
I am in love with this story already! Your doing a great job. I can't wait to read more, update soon please! :)Author's Response: So glad you like it! I'll update as soon as possible :) Report Review
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