I've never read a Hunger Games crossover before, and I think it's a really good idea. Kudos for thinking of putting it when Voldemort won, it's a good idea.
You have a couple of issues here and there, slight grammar issues. I would consider getting a Beta if you want to continue this story (which I seriously suggest you do, this looks good!).
Anothing thing, too. If Harry is dead (as it says in your summary) then how does he have children? Does he die long after DH? I would also suggest slowing down your exposition, spreading it out a bit through the first few chapters. You speed through the ride on the Hogwart's Express.
Otherwise, I'm really intrigued at this idea, and I think you've got really good dynamics going on! Good job!Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review :) I do need a beta, as this was written a long time ago. Thanks for the critiscm - I appreciate it, I really do.
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