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Review #1, by the midnight avenger

3rd February 2012:

Aww, that was really sweet! I like how you managed to keep the pace natural and give a good sense of the story even in such a short piece of writing. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #2, by slytherinchica08

Different Time, Different Malfoy

6th October 2011:

I found this to be a sweet and cute oneshot about Scorpius and Rose. It was interesting to think of Scorpius as being in Hufflepuff but was a fun idea. Really this piece was just cute and fluffy. I enjoyed reading it, I only wished that it had been longer.

The characterization was pretty good. I like that Rose didn't just say something right away, and that she tried to ignore him but then finally gave into him. I like that you added in Molly, Albus, and Roxy. It would have been fun to see Hugo's reaction to catching his big sister kissing Scorpius though.

But really this was a cute and fun oneshot about the two of them finally getting together. Great Job.

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always imagined Scorpius in Hufflepuff, no idea why though. Glad you liked it!

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