Aww, that was really sweet! I like how you managed to keep the pace natural and give a good sense of the story even in such a short piece of writing. Good work!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
I found this to be a sweet and cute oneshot about Scorpius and Rose. It was interesting to think of Scorpius as being in Hufflepuff but was a fun idea. Really this piece was just cute and fluffy. I enjoyed reading it, I only wished that it had been longer.
The characterization was pretty good. I like that Rose didn't just say something right away, and that she tried to ignore him but then finally gave into him. I like that you added in Molly, Albus, and Roxy. It would have been fun to see Hugo's reaction to catching his big sister kissing Scorpius though.
But really this was a cute and fun oneshot about the two of them finally getting together. Great Job.
~Slytherinchica08~Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've always imagined Scorpius in Hufflepuff, no idea why though. Glad you liked it! Report Review
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