I love the chapter names! XD

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it was a bit too descriptive. i think you decsribed rose evan's hair and eyes twice, so maybe just pick the one part where it matters most. there are 2 or 3 grammatical errors, and i really didn't need to know what color everything was in the first part. othe rthan that, i really liked it. the plot is beginning to shape up and i love how your main character is lily. i love lily potter/evans sooo much i might name my daughter lily when i have one:) keep writing! im going to read chapter 2 right now!

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its great realy enjyed it one thing tho is that u change the point of view randomly but its still good :)

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Its funny ! i love it and the new people such as Parker she and lilly remind me of me and my bestieee :)

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Its cool i always thought that J.k should write about james and lilly and how they got together :) thanks for writing one

Author's Response: Thanks! Me too... Then again if she wrote it I wouldn't have anything to be left to my imagination :P Thank you for taking the time to read!

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Fan-flipping-tastic! Remus is usually my fav character, and occasionally Alice, too, when she's shy around Frank. *adorable*. Keep up the writing and I'll keep up the reviewing :)

Author's Response: Awe thank you so much! I actually have so many chapters prepped and ready to post, I'm glad to know I have some appreciative readers :) Ps, I absolutely love the adjective!

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Love it so far. I can't wait to see what you do next. :)

Author's Response: Haha thanks! :) I will try to update regularly.

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