Ooh I like the idea behind this fic. I'd like to see a longer follow up, perhaps with Harry finding out either as an AU or 'later in life'. The ending seemed a bit thrown together, but is understandable (I read that it was your first - fantastic work). =) Report Review
good but the ending paragraph is a little oddAuthor's Response: thanks for the feedback! this was my first ever fanfic i wrote and am currently uploading another! to me, it feels a lot stronger than this Lunnaa xo Report Review
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