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Review #1, by magicmuggle01 the day before

15th November 2011:
This is a nice one shot. You some how manage to put a fair bit of information in so short a chapter. Though I do think you could expand more on the story by putting in more detail about their day.
I also think you can take out the horror/dark genre and put in romantic, unless you do add more in the horror department.
All in all though a nice story and 9/10.

Author's Response: well thank you and yes it was short but im making one more chapter before i finish it. thank you so muchhh for the reveiw :)

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