{reviewid: 2656753, reviewer: 'RavenclawStudent'}
9th February 2012:
Good chapter!! You have a few grammatical errors and "I"'s put as "i"'s and it seemed to be a bit rushed but nonetheless, amazing :)
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{reviewid: 2637444, reviewer: 'lovek'}
2nd January 2012:
oh my..
MORE PLEASE. :)
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{reviewid: 2632381, reviewer: 'Isabel%20Nisay'}
22nd December 2011:
wow!!! amazing!! but why are they gonna do IT so soon?
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{reviewid: 2631805, reviewer: 'Jakumo1'}
21st December 2011:
Whoa! Getting steamy on us are you? ':3
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{reviewid: 2631679, reviewer: 'StarOwl47'}
20th December 2011:
So sorry I didn't review yesterday! I stayed up and watched The Patriot and was to tired to read :(
I am absolutely HONORED that you would recognize my comments. It brings tears to my eyes :')
I'm so glad you're back! The story is going great so far and I hope to see this on the front page again soon!
I'm so glad that you fixed the spacing in this chapter, it makes this story much more fun and easy to read and enjoy :)
I'm still going to review EACH AND EVERY chapter!
Don't worry, I won't be annoying, just happy!
10/10!
~Leslie
P.S. Have you ever seen The Patriot? It's REALLY good and it as Jason Isaacs in it(Lucius Malfoy).
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{reviewid: 2631313, reviewer: 'KiraPotter16'}
20th December 2011:
Another lovely chapter! The kiss made my skin tingle. Keep writing! Perhaps make them longer? :) x
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{reviewid: 2631274, reviewer: 'Kichona%20Yume'}
20th December 2011:
More please.
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{reviewid: 2631271, reviewer: 'Kichona%20Yume'}
20th December 2011:
Lovely... i think a little out of character, not that I'm complaining.. can't stop smiling more like smirking just reading this...
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{reviewid: 2631270, reviewer: 'Kichona%20Yume'}
20th December 2011:
A little fast but definitely a must read...
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{reviewid: 2631128, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
19th December 2011:
thankyou for updating!
this chap was a bit short but its interesting anyway.
it might just be me but i think this story is moving a tiny bit too fast- but dont worry its still good!
cant wait till next chap!
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{reviewid: 2630876, reviewer: 'mmm'}
19th December 2011:
Omg! I had been waiting for this chapter, and you didn't disapoint. Can't wait for chapter four!
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{reviewid: 2630873, reviewer: 'Ilovecookies'}
19th December 2011:
It's a good story, but I think it's all moving a bit too fast.
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{reviewid: 2629640, reviewer: 'Up_2_No_Good'}
16th December 2011:
This is such a great story! I agree with lenthening the chapters. Also, I can totally see Hermione talking to herself in her head. ^-^ I love where this great plot is going and can't wait for an update!
10/10
~Grace
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{reviewid: 2626603, reviewer: 'mm'}
9th December 2011:
Awesome, and I bet the next chapter will be too.
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{reviewid: 2625331, reviewer: 'm'}
5th December 2011:
Love it! Keep it up.
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{reviewid: 2625319, reviewer: 'StarOwl47'}
5th December 2011:
Hi again! I was previously i_don't_have_an_account_yet, but now I'm StarOwl47! Good name huh?
I just feel like you need at least 1 person to review every chapter, I mean, everyone else does!
I just came to say that the story is going well so far! I LOVE the plot! And exclamation points! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !!!
The last thing that I must say is that, you should try lengthening the chapters. Like, if you have two chapters that would fit well together, put them together!
10/10!
~Leslie
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{reviewid: 2623322, reviewer: 'dezirae%20bryant'}
1st December 2011:
write more that was well written
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{reviewid: 2623188, reviewer: 'm'}
1st December 2011:
I cant wait to read more.
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{reviewid: 2622939, reviewer: 'blackangelwings'}
30th November 2011:
I like it, it's really good.
Can't wait for the next chapters!
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{reviewid: 2622931, reviewer: 'Ilovecookies'}
30th November 2011:
Ooh, I can't wait to read more. Beauty and the Beast was always my favourite. I hope you'll do well with this. :)
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{reviewid: 2622855, reviewer: 'RavenclawStudent'}
30th November 2011:
This is brilliant!! Pure excellency and a very original plot, I've never come across a werewolf story and this has a lot of potential!! I cannot wait to read the next chapter so upload soon please!!
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{reviewid: 2622843, reviewer: 'Kat'}
30th November 2011:
I would like to see where you take this story, so please hurry up. :)
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{reviewid: 2622839, reviewer: 'AppreciativeReader'}
30th November 2011:
Like the beginning of the story. Makes me want to know what happens next and that to son.
Cliche. Update soon.
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{reviewid: 2622692, reviewer: 'InWonderland'}
30th November 2011:
Gr8 when's the next chapter up??
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{reviewid: 2622670, reviewer: 'dramione%20grafoy'}
30th November 2011:
next chapter please.!great job !
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