That was really sad :-( I can't believe it was Albus!
That was a big shock.
Very interesting read.Author's Response: Haha thanks. Report Review
Finally something I haven't read before.
I like the way you wrote this, and that Albus was the killer, instead of the "perfect guy" he usually is.Author's Response: Thanks, this means a lot. :3 Report Review
It sucks! Go die you bloodsucker!
Lol it's AMAYZING. But where are the Marauders at?! Bring in the werewolves!Author's Response: OH MY GOD BESS.
Wolfie, shush child.
its next gen, the only wolves there are is Dom, Bill's daughter and she's not even in the story. Report Review
A very interesting story. Very original.
It seemed a little rushed at some spots, but overall it was laid out very well and worked together nicely. I guess I just wanted a little bit more of the story because it was so good and different. I much enjoy different.
Can't wait to see what other stories you come up with!
Keep writing! :)
Haha glad you like it! Yeah sorry it seemed a bit rushed, I just couldn't wait to get it out because I've been working on it for ages and I wanted to see what you guys thought of it.
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