Words cannot describe how much I love this! Please write more soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! I'm trying to update ASAP, but spring is always my busiest time, so I won't promise anything - but know that I haven't left the story!!! Report Review
Wow, this is amazing :)Author's Response: Thanks a lot :)
I've been away for the last two weeks, but I'm working on the next chapter :)
I'll update ASAP! Report Review
Interesting, now keep it going!Author's Response: Thanks a lot :) Hope you've read the newest chapters?
I'm working on the fifth chapter! Report Review
Really good!!! Please write more!Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm working on it! Report Review
I'd give this one an 8/10. I really liked the story/chapter but you could've been more a bit specific about the start though, I got a bit confused at first and I had to read it 2 times to get the whole thing and that's when I started liking it. My advices are that next time you could fix the spaces in between each paragraph, make the chapter a bit longer (but it's really good when you leave like a cliff-hanger) and you might already have this planned out or what not but I want to see Ginny's POV if that's okay. Overall, I really liked the whole story and I am so sorry for the long review but its better than nothing right? :) Really like the story and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. xx Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review, hope you've seen that I took your advice and I'm currently shifting between the POV's
Anyway, I'm working on the lenght and I found a way to fix the space thing!
Thanks for taking your time to review, it's really nice and helped me a lot - this is my first FanFic, so I'm pretty new to the whole thing! Report Review
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