The story was really good. Really like how you started. Hope you add another chapter. I love it. LOVE IT!!! Report Review
Good work on the redo of this chapter, its very well written and I can hear you in it.
Please don't leave us hanging like you have with your other stories! Pick one and continue writing it, you have a talent for writing and this is a good place to put your stories.
I hope to see more exquisite stories from you.
And seriously? Thankyou for flying with silversnitch? Someone ate lots of cheese for dinner.
Continue writing, I beg of you. Report Review
this is good, i like it:)
do more over the summer please please
i think i might know you. Report Review
I like it so far. Haha lily's dad knowing about James and Sirius made me laugh :). Keep writing and we'll wee where it goes!Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Please keep reading :) Report Review
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