Just read and saw this only had two reviews so i thought i'd give a review. brilliant song choice, and even though adele didn't write it, for me,her version is the best and she has a breathtaking voice. I also liked the way you ended the story, with Harry consoling hermione, just the way its meant to be.
If you're thinking of writing another song fic for h/hr I think fix you by coldplay would be a good choice. btw, keep up the lovely fics!Author's Response: i love that song!
thank u! Report Review
I like the song choice and I think the time slot you've chosen for it is absolutely spot on although I'm a little unsure if the short sentences are for me, just an opinion, please don't be offended.Author's Response: Okay, I'm not offended. The short sentences are meant to be short and sweet.thanks for your review and HAPPY HALLOWEEN!
~harmoni Report Review
So tragic and yet so sweet and touching. Adele is amazing, and so is this little story of yours. It flows really nicely and conveys all those pure, simple emotions neither wants to admit.
Third person Present tense is really tricky to pull of, yet you did it! This story simply HAD to be written this way. I would love to see a continuation, though, and if you take requests, no Canon, please!!!
Thanks for writing this one.Author's Response: Aww, thanks!I am happy to take any requests, and I am so happy you liked this one. It was really hard to finish. I submitted it in late september, and it only just got validated. I am considering a continuation, do you have a specific song in mind? Let me know if you do, I would be happy to write another one. Also, tell me what you exactly you mean by no canon. I'm making a meet the author page, so you can tell me there. Adele is really amazing, right? I reread this while listening to the song, and it was so cool! I suggest you do the same. Sorry for this LONG response, but I've been waiting so long for a review. Thanks so much! Report Review
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