Darn. Accio Kleenex. Flashback Roman Holiday.
Awesome, emotional piece. Completely different from what I've ever read here before, and, believe me, I have read - and reviewed - A LOT.

This short piece had that pleasant film noire atmosphere that captured me from the very first paragraph and held me in grasp until the very last sentence.

Perfectly written, tight grammar, simple yet effective storytelling. I can't give anything but a 10 and this one goes into my favourites. I'm going to recommend it to my fanfic friends as well.

Being a fan of H/Hr, I've also committed the crime of writing these two. If you are interested, check out "To Become Whole Again" or "Shadowlands". I'd LOVE to hear your thoughts.

Keep up the awesome writing!

All the best,

Zoltan

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I love your reivew! Totally just made my day! I was in Rome over my summer holiday and that's what inspired this story.

Thank you so much for the compliments. Since I don't beta my stories (which isn't always a good or bad thing) I do my best with the grammer and things like it because it is definitly not my strong suit.

Also, I appreciate that you'll recommend it. I feel like this one has fallen between the cracks, reader wise. As for your stories, I shall definitly read them and leave you with my thoughts!!

Thanks again,
lil_hermione_at_heart

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