Awww I just want to give her a big hug! It's a little weird how Teddy's hair turned red when he was marrying Victoire, even though that was what it did around Rose. Can't say I like Victoire much in this story, mostly because she would have known Teddy and Rose were going out. Teddy deserves a slap (or a hex) and I love Tom and Jerry! Best show EVER! You're amazing for putting that in. Anyway, it's gorgeous, if a little depressing, but gorgeous nonetheless. The song lyrics fit perfectly, and I love the idea of Teddy/Rose- first time I've ever heard of that idea!Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ I am so glad you liked it. I've never been a huge fan of Teddy/Victoire, so when I got this for a challenge, I decided that I'd put a bit of Rose in there, ya know? (: Report Review
Aw, this was so sweet, and so sad at the same time! I like Rose/Scorpius and Teddy/Victoire but the has really opened my eyes to a Teddy/Rose! I almost felt like punching Teddy when he said the Butter to my Beer and Sugar to my Quill, HE WAS SUPPOSED TO SAY THAT TO ROSE! And I loved how you used Tom and Jerry, that added a touch of humour to the one shot which I loved. Overall, I loved it! Love Livvy xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks!!! I love the pairing myself from reading a wonderful story by a wonderful author. So, I decided to make one myself. I don't really like canon pairings, so I love making up different ones, especially with the Next-Gens. It's the most fun. :) Thanks for your review! This is one of my favorite fics :) Report Review
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So this is my first time reading this type of story and its definetely a unique one. I am secure enough to admit that I'm sort of an ABBA fan, so I definetely have to commend your choice of music. The lyrics worked very well with the story, it seemed like something right out of Mamma Mia.
I'm a little confused about the timing of everything since in the epilogue we see Teddy with Victoire when Rose was 11. Did he leave Vic for Rose and then go back?
Overall an interesting storyAuthor's Response: Eh, sort of. And I'm glad you like the music. :P Basically, Teddy is maybe in his 30's, Rose about 22. Thank you for your review. Report Review
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