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Review #1, by Phoenix_Flames A Promise Broken

1st November 2011:
Awww, oh, Len.

This was another piece that I just couldn't wait any longer to read. I had to read it. And gah. I don't know how I went even a day without reading this.

This was just a perfect companion piece to Wildflowers. It fit perfectly into the mix of it all, and I just loved every bit of it.

Again, as always, your descriptions were perfect. So vivid and so real. I could connect with them so perfectly. And I think a factor that contributed to this feeling was having it in second person. I loved that change. It made it all seem so real and brought so much more emotion to it. I absolutely love how you did that.

It was so sad and so moving, but the ending was perfect and flawless. I couldn't have asked for a better end to it all. Now I can't wait for the sequel to Wildflowers. Gah, I'm dying for it!

Wonderful, Len! ILY! :D

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Review #2, by Cleopatraa A Promise Broken

6th October 2011:
Well this is Cleopatra from the forums with a review for the hooked sentence challenge. First of all, Iím so sorry for the lateness of the review but this is my exam year so Iím really busy. You have such a beautiful summary, one of the best I read so far also you banner is just wow. Itís truly a piece of art. Iím curious if you still ended up using an OC as main character ( Iím reviewing and reading at the same time ;) )

Onto the hooked sentence, since that's what this challenge was all about. I think you had one of the most beautiful hooked sentence. You also had an nice ending sentence but that wasnít what the challenge was about in my challenge I wanted you to start and end with the same sentence but it should still fit the story. Sorry ;) So because it doesnít suite the rules of the challenge your story is disqualified ( except if you change it) but it was a lovely story though. I'm sorry


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Review #3, by SunSation Gal 07 A Promise Broken

23rd September 2011:
Wow Len, this was brilliant. You're actually making me kinda sad that he's going to die, even though I don't really like him. But I love how you wrote this from his point of view. Brilliant Len. Absolutely amazing.

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