Hmmm... I found the chapter really amusing and as an introductory chapter it was pretty good. But... I don't think that the Gryffindor dormitories are usually dreary, are they? And how did Al get up into the girls' rooms because there's that enchantment.

I'm wondering how the "utterly disturbed mess of a life" part will come in. *coughDRAMAPLEASEDRAMADRAMADRAMAcough*

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You reviewed one of my stories so I thought I'd come and have a look at yours...
-First, if you want a banner then you have to join TDA and follow the requesting rules there...
-Second, this chapter was really good! Very short, and the spacing spazzed out a bit, but don't worry, it does that sometimes :P
-Third, UPDATE!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah spacing is kind of well. wacky. I love reviews! And thanks for the help...!

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It was fantastic, I loved it.

Author's Response: Good! I'm so glad! I'm trying to work on the next chapter.
~ILOVEASP

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Oh, I read this before :D

But I forgot to review...oh well, I'm reviewing now.

It was really good, for a first fanfic :D The only thing I could say to improve is...make the next few chapters long? I like long chapters :D

Keep up the good work (:

Author's Response: Trust me. They are going to be long because I like long chapters too. Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like it. I'll try to update ASAP.
~ILOVEASP

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Love it can't wait to read the rest :3

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update soon, "Daddy"
~ILOVEASP

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I love it! I can not wait to read the rest!(: You did a great job!

Author's Response: It'll be out soon (I hope validation doesn't take to long!)! Thank you for reviewing!
~ILOVEASP

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Okay I know this was super short, but I've got to admit I am in love with it already. :D

Your doing a great job! I feel like I could read this story for hours (if it was finished of course) Update soon please. :))

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll be sure to update soon and bring in a lot of new characters. I'm glad you liked it!
~ILOVEASP

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