6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by naziza The Thieving of Toads

22nd March 2012:
nice but albus is a slytherin

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Review #2, by Mary Ann The Thieving of Toads

26th December 2011:
hilarious chapter! Hopefully the ones in the future will be longer though! especial after such a wait! I can't wait to read the next chapter! The scene between her and Albus!

Author's Response: I'll try and make the next chapter super long! The next chapter will probably be up as soon as the queue re-opens :)
thankyou for reviewing!


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Review #3, by losers_lurgy My best friend is a traitor!

28th November 2011:
Love Alexa, Molly and Gareth! Awrh Jason and Alexa's twin bond is so ...non-existent...I love it because it makes a change from all the usual stories around here ;) Ahaha i predict Gareth will shortly be toad napped by a certain boy whose name rhymes with Balbus Trotter ;) Lurvee da beginnningz. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Jason and Alexa definitely aren't your typical twin brother and sister;P
Yay, I'm happy you liked it! Chapter four is up :)

xx


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Review #4, by PetrificusTotalus My best friend is a traitor!

21st November 2011:
Aww Alexa is very charming and funny, I like her very much. Try not to make it too cliche in future (partners in class is a little overdone) and watch out for tense, as it sometimes changes. But overall I think this story has lots of potential! :)

Author's Response: I understand what you mean about that bit being quite cliche, I re-edited last night so all that's gone now (well it will be when the chapter validates).
I'm glad you like Alexa:D Thanks for the review;)


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Review #5, by PetrificusTotalus I am definitely not a Hufflepuff

21st November 2011:
I like Alexa too! I think she's adorably funny :) Good start!

Author's Response: I'm sure Alexa would be pleased to hear that;)
thankyou!


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Review #6, by nina lupin I am definitely not a Hufflepuff

5th October 2011:
Alexa, Alexa... tut. tut. tut. accidentally groping Albus Potter's nose :D aww! and I actually have no idea why that is 'aww'able, frankly strange actually! nah, I really like her too.

anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, it is quite strange;) and I'm glad you like her!

the next chapter is validating at the moment so it should be up soon:D


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