It's unexpected review time! With Rin!
Augh, I dunno if it's the choral music I have playing in the background or just... the little lines in this pieces, but. Gah. This was really good. And so pretty, in a sad sort of way.
I think the thing I like most about your writing is just the way it flows. I mean, every sentence cascades into the next like a little waterfall, or something. It melts. It dissolves. It's really gorgeous, is what I'm trying to say.
For whatever reason, the "mumbled" you use in the last line really struck me. It's like her lips are brushing up against the fabric of his chest while she's saying it. And maybe I'm picturing it all wrong, which is entirely possible. Either way, it's really pretty.
Anyway. Before I get super rambly, I'll just stop. It was really lovely, dear.
xx RinAuthor's Response: Rin!
Thank you so much for this! I'm so sorry it's taken me ages to respond! I am so flattered by your praise, especially as you know how much I adore your own writing. I'm usually rubbish at romance or anything of the sort, especially like, legendary canon romance like Harry/Ginny! I'm glad you liked it though, I really am.
No, I know what you mean about the mumbling. It is as though she's buried into him, as though she barely has to say it all. Thank you for noticing that ♥ oh, you're super, just thank you for this review!
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OMG! That was amazing!! I loved it!! So good!! 10-10Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means tons :) x Report Review
beautifully written. nice and artistic with a natural flow.Author's Response: thank you, so much! :D x Report Review
Beautiful! I feel so honored that you wrote this for me, it's really lovely, well-written, and very romantic. I love the imagery in the description. I do love this pairing, and romance, and the fact that you spelled "voila" correctly lol. Thank you so much, and wonderful job on this story!Author's Response: Haha, no problemo! I'm glad you liked it :D I did try and focus on the romance, even though I'm pants at writing it! :D x Report Review
Why are you so brilliant?
You say you've only recently started writing one-shots, but you write like a genius artist. I'm so amazed by this piece. Ginny's tone is so weary and worried and yet so worried and gentle. I can practically feel her hesitance and how she's afraid this will all slip away from her soon. This whole piece had such a loving, soft aura about it, and I loved it to bits. Another terrific job, love!Author's Response: Oh bless you! Thank you so much! That is the nicest thing in the universe, thank you! You are being silly though. You are just as brilliant.
I'm so so flattered you like my oneshots, though to be honest I could pick 100 things that are wrong with them. I'm constantly worried about them, but thank you so much. You've given me tons more confidence, you really really have. Thank you!
I've never written Ginny before, aside from a little segment in Patchwork Figurines. I found her a little strange to write, too, because she's got so much pain after the war but we know her to be that really strong character she is inside. Loving Harry is her only real weakness, I guess, and I tried to show this in this piece. I'm so glad you liked it!
Thank you for the darling review! x Report Review
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