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Review #1, by Woodrow Rynne Identification; Unknown.

17th November 2011:
Hey! Woodrow Rynne here with your challenge review! :)

I KNOW THIS, I DO! Cormac McLaggen, right? And he fancies Hermione! *does a little dance* Usually, I'm quite bad at guessing, but you described him so clearly that it was fun to guess. So, congratulations on that count! :) That's one part of the challenge overcome!

I really like that you chose a minor character as well- not many people write about Cormac, and it's wonderful to see someone write him in such detail. Your writing is very well, too. "I am a well built guy, with a muscular form," This sentence was so Cormac, really. Arrogant much? I loved the way he talked about himself, that he is /not/ what he seems like...sigh. talk about ironical. :P

I would have liked you, though, to have shown this arrogant side more. I know you wrote him in a different light, but a little more attitude on his part would have been more canon.

But apart from that, you managed this challenge really well, and I really enjoyed this- the monologue style was quite effective. I loved the mysterious banner and the title and summary, so plus points on that! Thank you for participating, and look out for the results in January! :)

Author's Response: Heyy!!

That is correct ;)
Well done on the guessing, he does fancy Hermione indeed lol.
I'm a minor character shipper (generally) and am in the process of writing a McLaggen Novella :) I adore underloved characters, Seamus being my number one fav :) x
Sorry I didn't get quite into Canon :/ I did want to show another side of him, but at the same time I apologise for not getting into canon enough :/
*Smacks head*

Non the less thank you for reviewing my entry :)
And Ill keep an eye out for the winners in Jan :)

~Karni. x

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Review #2, by megan2u Identification; Unknown.

16th October 2011:
My guess is Cormac McLaggen! In love with Hermione Granger! So there! Anyways onto the review, I think it's pretty tough to have a cohesive story without revealing any names, but I think this was as good as it gets. You provided the background on how he came to like her and what he plans to do in the future, as well as his current dilemma. He's not exactly the most likeable character from the books, and you certainly didn't get anymore sympathy from me towards him!
Great job at a difficult challenge!

Author's Response: So there!
;) Your guess was correct :)
Oh thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed reading this ^_^ Poor bloke :) I love underloved characters, Cormac and Seamus being 2 of my favourites :) So I did Cormac :P
Well done on a correct guess, and thank you so much for your lovely review ^_^
~Karni, xx

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Review #3, by FLuffYfaerie Identification; Unknown.

9th October 2011:
Its Cormac Mclaggen.

Author's Response: oh it could be O.o x
Thank you for the review :D x

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Review #4, by EnigmaticEyes16 Identification; Unknown.

8th October 2011:
Cormac McLaggen!!! Ahahah. At first, I thought it was Percy; it made sense until I reached the part about him being well-built and then I had no idea who it was until the quidditch bit came up. But it was really good. I like how you picked someone that we who read the book, or even just seen the movie, should get, but still a minor character of sorts.

Author's Response: O.o Percy? Now really :P
Correct guess, Cormac McLaggen.
Nawww I'm glad you liked this :) I love Minor characters, and wanted to get into the head of some :)
Thank you for your lovely review :)
~Karni, xx

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Review #5, by AriesGirl40 Identification; Unknown.

8th October 2011:
My guess... Draco is falling for Hermione. Very well written :)

Author's Response: wrong :/ x But thank you anyway!!! xx

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Review #6, by Miss_Bianca Identification; Unknown.

1st October 2011:
I thought about doing this challenge, but decided not to, and when I saw your entry, thought I'd check it out ;) so...

Cormac McLaggen is my guess! You had me for a while, but as soon as you mentioned Quidditch, I'm pretty sure I had you! Amazing what we can do with words, so good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you :) and I have to re-edit it :/ omething really wierd happened when I poste dit and all my paragrpahs got mixd up. :/ x

But thank you :D xx

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