Reading Reviews for Stop Making a Fool Out of Me
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Review #1, by happy_person must be amortentia

25th January 2012:
hahah woow, that was so mind-blowingly brilliant! i loved this to bits. it's so well written, i love james thoughts and the whole idea of the story was just fantastic :D really, well done!

Author's Response: thank you :)

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Review #2, by xjamesandlilyx must be amortentia

19th November 2011:
Haha I like it! Thank you for uploading it!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Review #3, by PenguinsWillReignSupreme must be amortentia

11th October 2011:

I possibly missed some of the in-jokes but I definitely got a fair few. Has Jack read this? Please PM him continuously for the next month if he hasn't.

The lack of moustache was kind of heartbreaking. The arrogance of this Jack fellow was pretty spot on for his character (-cue angelic eyes for any possible lurking Jack who might have reason to find this offensive though I don't know why as this one is evidently fictional-). Beards, PEACH (we all know that's meant to be), being mightily inferior to James Potter, and eejits and other stuff.

This is like...writing perfection.

If you don't bug him to read and review it a million times a day, I will.

You're amazing ♥

Author's Response: Rachel! ♥

I don't know if he's read it! I'm PM'd him once, but he never replied. Eejit.
I considered having something about a moustache, but thought that perhaps it deserved a story all its own. Jane will be pleased about the beard. :P

I'm so glad you liked it ♥


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Review #4, by scarlettandgold must be amortentia

25th September 2011:
Okay I'll start backwards and say that ending was ADORABLE. I'm a sucker for adorable endings. It was so like them.
That brings me to the rest of the story. SO BELIEVABLE! I was just reading it and couldn't help but marvel at how well you caught what I imagine James to be like. I love his stalker-ness. I simply adored the interaction between James/Remus and then all the boys at the end. It was so real and honest and so like them.
I love how he hates on Lily's boyfriend. It was so real and I couldn't help but laugh at the description. This whole piece was so hilarious and lovable and just overally such an adorable piece! I don't really have any critique because you're wonderful. I love your writing. And I'm super sorry this is so late!

Author's Response: Thank you darling ♥
What a lovely review. I appreciate your taking the time to read through it for me. I'm so glad you liked it!

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Review #5, by Opalpixiechick must be amortentia

20th September 2011:
Love this chapter. : ) When is the next coming.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) However, it's just a one-shot, so no more chapters.

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