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Wow, this was really good. I love the whole tone of this piece because although the mood is slightly eerie it works really well. I love your characterisation and I think that the way you conveyed his emotions was really original; i loved it! 10 :)Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so glad that you liked this piece- it's really different from all my other pieces. It's great that you liked the characterization and the description. I really tried to write all the differences and similarities between them and what Harry's thoughts about them could have been. Report Review
Deep, Although it's sorta confusing. I got it all at the end though!
I like the style of which you wrote this, Harry's thoughts right? On everyone's favorite old headmaster. Right?
It was good!
Mike.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked the style- yes, it was Harry's thoughts on Dumbledore. I'm glad that got through. :) Report Review
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