This deserves so many more views.
I absolutely love this story- well, these stories. You made each of them incredibly moving in their own way; well done for choosing to write about the lesser-remembered members of the Black family. I always appreciate stories that are respectful of canon, and this is an especially good example of how to do that while still making the story your own. In the short spaces that you gave yourself you managed to give each of the characters described an individual personality that felt very real and believable to me- I especially loved your portrayal of Alphard at the end.
Excuse me gushing, but yes.
Well done. :) Report Review
Absolutely loved the attention to detail. Report Review
I really think this was written well. I enjoyed reading it a lot and i hope u had fun writing it! Report Review
GREAT STORY! It was very interesting to get to know the Blacks better, they are a really unpredictable familyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I'm so glad you liked it and yeah, the Black's are really interesting and strange, which makes them very fun to write. :D Thanks again! Report Review
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