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Review #1, by Catherine Pandora Winters

25th September 2011:
That was really good :) I like the less-cliche (so far) storyline and I love the title--so creative and funny! I can tell that you can make the story creative and funny also, and I LOVE THAT! Keep writing, I'll keep reviewing :)

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you...I didn't know it was that good. Thanks!

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Review #2, by HermioneJGranger Pandora Winters

24th September 2011:
I really really like this chapter! Good job getting me hooked, not that it's hard to do.right. Anyway, as I said, really really good! I mean it's funny but not to a point where it's distracting. I love Dora's voice...she's so...vibrant, for want of a better word. (She reminds me quite a lot of Tonks, which I assume is no coincidence as they have the same nickname...) I really, really like the way you introduced the characters, because it was easier to follow then having a bunch of people thrown at you as something else is supposed to be happening. I also really liked the Hufflepuff thing, because everyone always portrays Hufflepuffs really one-dimensionally (they're ALWAYS the quiet, nice ones) and yet they're obviously not so one-sided (Nymphadora Tonks.enough said). So yeah. Please keep writing! I'm really excited to see where this goes!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's actually just a bit of a coincidence that Pandora's nickname is the same as Tonks's...that just made sense for her nickname. But I guess I was thinking a bit of Tonks when I wrote this.

Yeah, I wrote down character descriptions at first mostly for my sake, because a lot of times I can't for the life of me remember characters that I'm supposed to be using, so it's easier to just have a description right there for me.

I think there's a lot more to Hufflepuff than people think (Hufflepuff all the way, baby!) and everybody has a trouble streak in there. So, that's how I made Dora!

Thanks for reviewing!


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