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Review #1, by The Summer Snake Fire

16th May 2015:
Greetings from The Summer Snake! I have recently slithered out of hibernation and discovered this amazing place with such amazing stories, so I want to read and review as many as I can before I go back into hibernation!

Wow, this was really very sweet and nice. I absolutely loved it. Your characterisation of this young Molly in love with Arthur was very good. I really connected with her and was rooting for her. I also really liked Arthur's characterisation. I was also amused to see his fascination for Muggle stuff still present, it made me smile. The ending bit was my favourite as they didn't care about anyone but escaped into their old world. It was really just heartwarming and the entire thing was adorable.

I also liked how you handled the sensitive bit of the man forcing the 'dance' on Molly. I was glad she managed to push him away and found Arthur. You described her situation well.

Over all, your descriptions were brilliant and I could really visualise the scenes very well. That was some awesome writing and great plot concept! Here, summer cheer for you! *showers confetti and flowers* All in all, I really enjoyed reading this and I'm glad I found it while slithering across the lawn. If I were human, I'd be hugging you right now and clapping but since I'm a snake I'm just going to hiss appreciatively and kinda nod my head and smile xD

Good work! Keep writing such amazing stuff =)

Now, I'm off to explore more of this wonderful sun! See ya!

With love,
The Summer Snake

Author's Response: Summer Snaakee!!!

You are so kind! Thank you for gracing me with your presence ♥

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one-shot! I think Molly and Arthur are the cutest so I wanted to just squee about them hehe. I love that Arthur is 100% curious in every situation ever, he's just so like inappropriate at a 'party scene' and I thought it would be nice to put him in one!

NOO SUMMER SNAKE GIVE ME A HUG ♥ ♥ ♥ (except if you're like a boa constrictor maybe don't if that's okay) THANK YOU FOR SLITHERING ON BY TO LEAVE ME A REVIEW, YOU ARE SO LOVELY ♥

:D :D

Laura xxx


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Review #2, by scarlettandgold Fire

25th September 2011:
Laura, you've done it again.
First off, my apologies for this taking so long >.< I've wanted to get around to it for so long but school, etc kept getting in the way.
This lovely little piece drew me in from the very first line. Music, people, parties, it all created such a wonderful aura about this piece! I then fell in love with Molly because she's so lovably awkward! I could completely relate to how flustered she felt when the other man was hitting on her, etc, it all felt so real! And of course when Arthur comes, they're both so cute I just want to squish them. Sorry that's a little weird, but you get what I mean.
I loveee the relationship you created between them. In the books, we see that the two of them are so much in love but their relationship is rarely explored. I love that you took a chance with a sort of unusual shipping and made it work so wonderfully. This piece is adorable and beautiful and I LOVE it just like I love all the rest of you're writing. You're so so so talented, don't ever stop writing!

Author's Response: Helloo!

Oh, gosh! I feel like I start every response to your reviews with an 'Oh something or other!', but I think its because I'm always astounded and flattered by your reviews! Thank you tons!

Arthur and Molly, to me, define soulmates, and I wanted to write this piece because they're awkward soulmates too! Being in love isn't meant to be romantic or over dramatic - you're meant to have fun and not care about anyone else. I imagine Molly to be uncomfortable around other guys, because her heart always has and always will belong to Arthur. I had a lot of fun writing this to be honest :)

I'm so glad that you liked that I chose them for this piece, because I am too! They are so under loved. And you are too kind! I feel over loved! Thank you tons and tons and tons, times forever! You're the best!

Laura x


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