Reading Reviews for Inevitable
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Cait♥ he cannot stop.

17th October 2011:
Really good! Normally, I like longer ones but this was incredbible. You ended it perfectly!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it since I tried something so different with this one.

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Review #2, by Anonymous he cannot stop.

15th October 2011:
I always had a soft spot for Sirius/Lily stories. You are a good writer, but it was too short for my liking. If you have time check out the story "The Continuing Story of Ainsly Hallow" it's not my story but I loved it and hope it becomes more popular. Thanks!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. Thank you for the kind review!

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Review #3, by happy he cannot stop.

22nd September 2011:
So basically Sirius and Lily are terrible people who are betraying the one person each of them claims they love the most?

Author's Response: No, not exactly. What I meant to get across was that one cannot control who they love. Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #4, by lightningninja he cannot stop.

18th September 2011:
i think that this was rather short for a one shot, i wish you'd put in a little more detail but i think the way you portrayed their thoughts was really well done. it was very believable and i liked reading it =)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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