Really good! Normally, I like longer ones but this was incredbible. You ended it perfectly!Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it since I tried something so different with this one. Report Review
I always had a soft spot for Sirius/Lily stories. You are a good writer, but it was too short for my liking. If you have time check out the story "The Continuing Story of Ainsly Hallow" it's not my story but I loved it and hope it becomes more popular. Thanks!Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the writing. Thank you for the kind review! Report Review
So basically Sirius and Lily are terrible people who are betraying the one person each of them claims they love the most?Author's Response: No, not exactly. What I meant to get across was that one cannot control who they love. Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
i think that this was rather short for a one shot, i wish you'd put in a little more detail but i think the way you portrayed their thoughts was really well done. it was very believable and i liked reading it =)Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
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