Oh man I love, love, love this! You wrote Remus just as I'd imagine him, and I loved Tonks' running commentary that lets her personality shine through even though she's quite upset for most of the scene. I also love the way Tonks freaks (she never was an impassive character) and Remus calms her down, because it is so in character for both of them! In short, you did a really, really good job portraying the characters and each of their struggles and their relationship and it's great! So keep writing!Author's Response: thank you so much!!! this was my first attempt, so this is lovely to hear! i have the first chapter of a nice long story waiting for validation right now. it's called 'wake up & dance with me', so keep your eye out for it! thanks again!! :) Report Review
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