Hi, it's hidden_secrets from the forums! I'm really gald you asked me to check this out, it's was so sweet! I've never read a R/S fic before, because I didn't think I'd like them, but this just changed my mind. I never like Dramione, but that was because Hermione belonged to Ron, this pairing is different. I love how you have written Rose and Scorpius, and they way the whole thing is written is amazing! I really like the description at the start, it was beautiful!
10/10 and keep up the great work. Let me know if you want me to read any of your other work x
~ Eilidh xAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! I know what you mean, personally, I'm no Dramione fan (Ronmione forever) but Rose and Scorpius grew on me. I used to hate them now they're my OTP. Report Review
Oh, how sweet. I wish this kinda thing would happen in real life. Yes, I think this fic deserves a 10/10. You've converted me. I officially read Next Gen stories.Author's Response: Haha, I feel so honoured! And thanks so much! Report Review
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This was a cute one shot. Very mysterious in a way because you didn't give us all the information about Rose and her relationship with whoever cheated on her. You didn't give us why Scorpius or how he fell in love with her and you didn't make it a huge debatable topic in Rose's mind if she should or should not believe what he said. I think what I liked most about this overall was the fact that they didn't really know each other and yet they're starting this relationship, moreso for Rose, as a way to save her. I also like the length, I wish I could write something with so little words and make them all mean so much!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review x
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So, this was cute :)
It was a perfect little one shot really - we didn't get to know either of the characters really well, but you suggested enough about Rose that I could really imagine her sat by the lake and Scorpius was cute xD
I liked that you didn't go back into the whole ins and outs of who cheated on her and such, but instead kept the idea that she had been cheated on and was obviously not feeling to hot about the whole thing.
Your description was really pretty and the image of them sitting by the lake together was really really cute!
-ACAuthor's Response: Thanks for the awesome review, it made my day!
I'm glad you liked it, it took me a while to get right as this was my first Rose/Scorpius and it was hard because I have read so many ScoRose and trying to make my own take on it that was different is harder than it looks.
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Hi! :) Here for review tag!
This was a really romantic, fluffy oneshot. I like how you didn't give the entire story, just suggested that Rose had been cheated on and that Scorpius was there to be a shoulder to cry on. Your description was really pretty, but I think that you could improve upon the flow a little, by maybe slowing down a bit and taking your time to explain stuff.
Really like this though, I'm a sucker for romance :) Good job!Author's Response: Yay, and thanks for the amazing review! I'm glad you liked it, it took a lot of work! Hehe, I love a bit of Romance too :)
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Hey Manga Girl sorry about the wait for the review I thought I would be able to figure out how to do it on my blackberry, turns out I was mistaken!
I really enjoyed this, usually when I read Sco/Rose they already know each other and either hate each other or are good friends. The fact that Rose really didn't know him at all was interesting and I really liked the idea.
The idea that Rose was already broken sort of (I don't have another way to describe that haha) and Scorpius was the one wanting to fix her was also very sweet. When he kissed her it was such an "Aw" moment. One of those that just puts a grin on your face!
Thanks again for entering, i'm really glad you did this was a lovely piece to read. It made me smile.Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for the review, the wait was worth it! Thanks for all the comments, they made my day and I am so glad you liked it, I was a bit nervous posting this one.
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