This story is amazing. I don't care that its short, you really captured there relationship well. I know there was only a snippet of the end but I wonder what tom/minerva was like in the beginning? I think the end is easier to write because you're writing Voldemort rather than Tom Riddle and we know more about Voldemort. I loved both of their portrayals so much and the plot was great; very touching.
Bex xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it :) Report Review
Hi. I figured I would give this a shot since this is one of my favorite pairings. I love your idea and I love how you have characterized Tom. Minerva seems a little desperate to me, but I can see what you're getting at. (And I don't mean that in a bad way...I'm just very attached to Minerva, that's all). I think you have room to expand on this...and I would be interested to see what you do. I love that more people are writing about Tom and Minerva...I feel like I'm out on a limb sometimes. All in all, though a little short, this was pretty good.Author's Response: thank you! and about Minerva seeming desperate, it's supposed to be out of character for her, because that's what Tom has done to her... and about expanding the story, i might if the urge hits me hard, but otherwise it's probably not going to happen. i'm glad you find the idea interesting, but i kind of like the story just the way it is :) and as to it being short, yes i know i disapointed myself with that too, but i guess i feel like it would almost cheapen the story if i just tried putting fillers in? if that makes sense? anyhoo, i'm happy you enjoyed the story, thanks much for the review :) Report Review
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