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Review #1, by Seacoastmuggle Some Things Are Unforgivable

4th November 2012:
Its always tough to read about Ron being abusive, but I think you did a nice job here - managing to keep him a bit still true to character. I have to admit I chuckled at the Cho reference. A good read!

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words.

I always try to stick to canon while still interjecting some ideas of my own, so it was a bit of a challenge to take an abusive Ron and fit him into the canon Ron, but I feel I succeeded fairly well in this story.

Feel free to read my other stories and leave reviews on them as well = )

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Review #2, by auror_snape Some Things Are Unforgivable

8th September 2011:
I'm glad Hermione didn't go back to Ron after that.

Author's Response: As the title says, some things are unforgivable.

Thanks for reading = )

-Chris Arin

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Review #3, by Timechild Some Things Are Unforgivable

7th September 2011:
Interesting chapter.

You portrayed the situation well. I can see how Hermione would react to Ron's actions. I don't remember Ron having a temper, but I can see it with the way you told it.

The kiss between Harry and Hermione was also nicely done. It was not too fast and not to slow a reaction to everything that happened. I hope you take it slowly for them. Going too fast would ruin the story I think.

Overall, nicely done. Keep it up.

Author's Response: I suppose Ron had more of a...jealousy problem? But it usually came out as a temper tantrum of sorts.

I'm glad you liked the kiss. It was 1:30 in the morning and I was half asleep when I wrote that part, so I was curious as to how my readers would respond to it.

Thanks for the praise = )

- Chris Arin

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