Is it a set up? Glori knew of the date and just happenned to be there and then Draco is also srood up.., now his being stood up is strange but could have thought it a business dinner.. oh well Report Review
the story was really good and sweet . Report Review
i remembered ur bday!
thanx for the gr8 read :D Report Review
I really wanted to review each chapter, but i was to engrossed reading I was determined to not stop till I finished! Lol Report Review
Oh and Ps. Its September the 13th soon so I wish u Happy Birthday! :D I hope you will have a great birthday with much presents and so on! :D
MM ~ Still A Proud Hufflepuff ;) Author's Response: Thank you for the bday wish! :) It was a great day! Report Review
Well Im sorry I havent reviewed all the chapters but I just thought it would be better if I just say everything in one review ;) ok so here it comes :P are you ready? Ok thats good ^^
First off I want to say I really enjoyed this story, good plot and so on but what I didnt like was that everything was so perfect in one way or another, even with the whole Ron is crazy thing. You could also see from a mile coming that everyone was going to have perfect lives, and that Ron will live in Last Chance so it got kind of boring at the end. AND (yep I write 'and' in big letters xD) it was all so mushy, and hermione was not hermione in a way :/ cause one thing that she did after the pregnancy that was that she cried ALL the time. Hermione is strong and doesnt cry for the smallest things someone says to her :o (in my opinion) EVERYONE I mean everyone were so mushy, like kissing each other all the time, hugging each other when they have just met, saying touchy stuff all the time and its just not normal, Im sorry if I hurt your feelings but I dont want to lie and I dont want that someone says that to you in a harsher way so thats why Im telling you this :) BUT (oh yeah theres always a but :D ) I liked the story really much and u are a good writer! :D
Hope I dont upset you :)
9/10 MM ~ A Proud Hufflepuff Author's Response: Thank you for being honest, and you didn't hurt my feelings!! :) I really appreciate reviews, as long as they are honest, thats all I want! :) I agree it was a mushy story, which is what I was going for, I had a bad time in my own life when I wrote this, I just needed something that I could pretend with...so there you go Mondays! :) Thanks again for the review!!! :) Report Review
Bravo, merci and thank you,have greatly enjoyed your novel and am looking forward to reading your next one. I do check to be sure it is completed. i start and read all the way through. am not good on waiting for an ending. MY YOU HAVE A A GREAT FUTURE IN WHATEVER YOU DECIDE. HOPE IT IS WRITING... Report Review
no cure.second chance? just where are his parents ? guess I worry over Molly... been difficult to see ron like this,,, lets have a kind ending,,please Report Review
I understand a little, but am still confused over Greg even being in the picture and why he did the unforgivable curse with cissy. Ron it seems is pocessed somehow. Mione does have a kind heart, but she it seems is also putting her family in danger. so I am ready for next chapter. wowo so many love birds I am loosing track;;; Report Review
okay, did the potion he took like a nit wit make him totally crazy or just bring out all his neg attributes.how in the world could a man who indager his children and nearly kills the mothe carrying said children ever have right to see them a restraining order for life should be in force. even if he miraculaously gets healed he does not need to be in mione's life. ok reading on,, u r as good as always, Report Review
last chance, is that going to be your newest novel? sounds as if it could be. I still do not understand about ron, did he escape or what. wy is now facing the Kiss.? help Report Review
knew there was another villian, now am schocked on who it is. but do not understand about ron and wy he has to have the kiss. was he under a curse..or just a jerk .. Report Review
I have immensely enjoyed the time spent reading your lovely "Monday". I am even more a fan of yours and hope to continue to read more workds from you, within this same higher code of ethics. there is uglinesss and pain and sorrow, but you share it with also dignity, caring and strenght. I know I appreciate your skill, and so do many others. Report Review
Beautiful,,,just beautiful with a meg Ryan accent..I sya this...
It is always so nice ot have a good loving caring feeling. I am wondering just a smidge about Molly and Arthur, they are the grandparents too, will thye have any involment. I mean Molly helped with wedding, but where was she at the birth. beautiful.. Report Review
thank you, thank you, I am so glad that the I do's were sad before oh aren't they sweet cherubs.. the marriage complete reception must now be at st mungos.. will you let ron re-enter later in another story, usre hope not.. Report Review
please do not have the birth before the wedding...i never understood why now people even wait till after so they'll look good in their wedding pictures.. oh well Report Review
nice to see ron get a bit of medicine, still it is amazing how good you are at making the story alive and real. thanks for the hard work and efforts and all you put into this story. now am going to continue enjoying your talented story telling of Hemione and friends.. Report Review
what an imagitive party idea and no I wouldnt have one like it. but goes to how fun and creative you are. did you have help in creating the party plans.. I know it is goine to get very serious next. hope I cna handle it... good job..
must tell you I am an old lady who enjoys harry Potter and discovered the novels trhough my grandchildren. So some of the new editions have been a bit diffferent for my reading. but am never to old to be non judgemental. new age aI guess.Author's Response: I absolutely love your reviews! I probably won't reply to each one, but I do read all of them, I don't think it is odd that people of all ages love HP. I write all my stories alone, but I do sometimes get ideas from reviews, if someone says something that triggers an idea in my mind, I go with it.
The parties in this story I researched games, and things to do and them tried to make it magical, since it is Harry Potter. I also thought about what I personally would like if I were in that situation.
I am a very fanciful sort, I daydream often and usually tell people I live in a fantasy world in my mind, which I sort of do. I have a very active imagination!
Anyway, I am so glad you have enjoyed my stories and thanks again for reviewing! :) Report Review
ron is not the ron of the series, and he is nuts. where is there any thought to Lavenar. How does she feel about all this?
I can only expect to see ron in prison or dead. an that is sad for his character.
you sure can keep things moving and in the same direction. I just keep feeling a twist must be coming.. or is that just me? Report Review
It must have been Ron, but still think there are tow of them after her. your wrting just flows so naturally. happiness an heart ache keep seesawing, but hope never seems to fail. to be continue... thanks Report Review
Just a question, but with Harry in his position and the family of weasleys knowing about ron, why was there not a barrier put to keep him away or for him to be found. why is Hermione is a position to ever be alone with a threat over her head. Ron is he under someones spell? Pansy stll seems untrustworthy, but that might be a distraction. If hermione was as smart as sheis suppose to be, why does she not keep her want always withe her to protect her babies. I am just confused how she keeps getting into these situations.. good writing and attention and loved the games.. Report Review
I have a feeling the Patronus will wind up being important. I am enjoying every page. I am not a critic and can only sy yes I like or don't. The grammar or misspelling and use of he or she does not matter to the content. Looking forward tot he next chapeter, and then to reread it over again. I like to read things I have enjoyed several times.Author's Response: Thank you! I do the exact same thing I read things over and over if I like them...Harry Potter I have read the whole series like 4 or 5 times... Report Review
wow, she is in love completely, draco must be as well, though he has not made it all that vocal, but neither has she. I do not know French myself, but it does not matter to me the name, only I hope Cassie is not hurt. she seems nice. on to next chapter, well done Report Review
all the chapters since my last review have become exceedingly better than I had hoped. It seems obvious that Ron must be the curplit, yet it is also to obvious as well. So if there is a twist, I am still trying to figure who else it might be. maybe jake. anyway when i went to view next chapter it would nt let me , hope this is not a way to force reviews. for I hope to re read tis without having to make stops once i read it the first time. you are still my favorite author to date,. I still o not undertand the kissing and intimacy in public, ole fashion I guess, light pecks in public but passion in private. LOL Report Review
excuse me if I do chapters in groups. you hsvr Rita down to a T.. lol and the way things can get confused is so very easy to do and realistic. sgsin zi likr your writing form , can see not recomended change. zi also understand not telling Harry cause he is Ron's best bod... charlie is new to the picture and seems like he could be good for Hemione, but hate to see him hurt, cause we know it is going to be Draco. Just a lot of blab, blab before it happens, will be interesting in how it unfolds. she is indeed a character. I think she cna hold up, but those preganant women can be dangerous and unpredictible and very vunerable. I hope you extend to Hermione some inner strength to deal with all her challenges in a way not to have her bed hopping as in other stories, I did like Second chances dearly.. whether you read these late reviews I have no idea. but please excuse that I do nto respond to each chapter,, bravo again,,Author's Response: I do read these! Thanks!!! :) Also I'm okay with multiple chapter reviews. You are awesome! Report Review
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