:) Great job! I knew I picked this story for a reason. Your writing style is so delightful,i can barely wait for the next chapter. Plz update soonish.
loads of love,
-Dizzy.

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Hi again.

Something tells me that James Potter 11 had better watch out. And Ariana sounds like one crazy mixed up person. This story sounds like it's going to be every bit as good as your Elizabeth story.
I'll reserve anymore comments until I read more. But 10/10 so far for your wonderful start and once again adding to favs so I know when you update.

By the way. I loved the idea in your Royalty story of William and Kate having two children. And if you do go into anything historical about the British Royal Family, I will certainly help with keeping you correct.

Author's Response: Im glad you like this story. This one is a special one.

Thanks alot, for your help with royalty. I kinda do need it.

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the chapter isnt that bad, but i would like to read another chapter before i decide if i like it or not... :)

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I loved it!
It's brilliant so far and i really hope you update. (You will, right? Right?)
I loved the bra stuffing, the dancing on table tops and yes, the snogging and hip grinding. Oh and the characters and well, just about everything actually. I suggest you get a banner made from TDA, because people should really read this. It's SO worth it.
UPDATE, woman! This is too good to leave!

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I LOVE THIS. this is extremely wonderful. Especially the hip grinding. Oh yeah.

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