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Review #1, by Dramionedrunadrinny Oh crap...

22nd December 2011:
Yay another awesome chapter. I wonder what happens in the next. Please update soon
10/10
~Dramionedrunadrinny

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Review #2, by hpfan1 It all starts with a sound

21st December 2011:
KEEP WRITING THIS GRIPPING STORY!

enough reason.

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Review #3, by Ily It all starts with a sound

18th December 2011:
Thank you so much you guys :) I have a bit. Okay a lot of writers block so my apologies :)

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Review #4, by ms4aisa It all starts with a sound

24th September 2011:
please continue! seems like a good start to an awesome story :)

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Review #5, by Dramionedrunadrinny It all starts with a sound

3rd September 2011:
This story is awesome. It has grammar mistakes but that can be easily fixed. Please continue this story!

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Review #6, by sweetlove It all starts with a sound

3rd September 2011:
think u should because you have a good start so why not go on

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Review #7, by Crescent Moon  It all starts with a sound

2nd September 2011:
This is a great plot, but you've made quite a few mistakes. Just read through it, you've missed out on a lot of capital letters, and then you've added some in the middle of words. Remember names have to have a capital. Also if you look through, you'll see that you've missed a few pieces of puntuation, and you need to add a couple of spaces. If you just add those it will make the chapter much easier to read XD
Anyway apart from that, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next :)

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