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Review #1, by MissMdsty The Idea

8th March 2013:
Hello there!

I really like reading about what happened at Hogwarts in the trio's 7th year, since it's actually a part of canon that we never got to see, except for bits and pieces.

I like how Neville is so grown up in this first chapter and takes on the task of organizing the resistance within Hogwarts.

If I may, I would like to say that I'd like to see more descriptions in this, as opposed to dialogue, especially in the part where they share the plan with the DA. What did their body language tell us? What were their facial expressions?

All in all, this was a good beginning to the story! Good job and good luck with it!

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 The Plan

27th April 2012:
Hi again

You are a rotter leaving us on a cliffie like that. I hope you update soon, I must know what happened next.
And I'm still awaiting your update to your other story.
10/10 and plz plz update both stories ASAP. Adding to favs.

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying my stories. I do hope to update them more often. However, I apologize for being so busy and I don't know when I'll have a chance to write more. Please try t be pacient.

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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Asking McGonagall

27th April 2012:
Hi again

This chapter flowed very well. I wonder how they got into Snape's office? I must read on to find out.
9/10.

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying my stories. I do apologize on the matter that I'm not sure when I'll have the time to write more. But please check back often!

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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 The Idea

27th April 2012:
Hi again.

Neville may seem slow at times, but he is a true Gryffindor at heart. Loyal and brave.
This story sounds really good, I don't believe I've ever read a story like this on the archive before. I often wondered how the members of the DA stole the sword.
So 9/10 and onto the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying! I do hope to write more soon. I don't mean to keep readers hanging!

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Review #5, by Charmedcat The Idea

4th December 2011:
Great! It's interesting to read from this point of view, rather than the more heroic Harry. =) Neville's words are so cute. ^^

Author's Response: thanks so much! :)

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Review #6, by Loony Flannagan Asking McGonagall

29th November 2011:
I really like the start of your story... only two let's call it... misprints.
1. Dean had to hide the whole year, remember? the trio had overheard them somwhere in october i suppose, which meant he couln'd have gone too school at all.
2. Peaves doesn't make sounds of footsteps, he might be a poltergeist, but I suppose he'd more likely bang on the doors or something ^^
loved Neville speech though! lifted my spirits as well! :*

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I hate to admit it but I actually didn't finish reading the book when I wrote this and found later that I had to change a few things because before I only had seen the movie and you really cannot rely on the movies to these books (for example the 5th book vs. the movie). I've only read the series once and I just officially finished the last book the other day. Hahaha I really hate to admit it! But again, thanks!

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Review #7, by FollowTheSpiders The Idea

16th November 2011:
Excellent story, I loved the kiss on the cheek at the end. :) So cute! The only thing I suggest is perhaps watch the flow of the sentences. Sometimes it comes off as a bit choppy. Regardless the story is fine and lovely^^

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I appreciate your suggestion!

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