{reviewid: 2783482, reviewer: 'shez'}
23rd April 2013:
when are you going to update? I really like this story!
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{reviewid: 2759578, reviewer: 'Ukana'}
20th December 2012:
It's one of the best stories that I have read. It's worth waiting for an update :) just try to make it as soon as you can :)))
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{reviewid: 2741384, reviewer: 'Rose'}
21st September 2012:
Come ooon finishhh iit!!! This is driving me mad!!
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{reviewid: 2735441, reviewer: 'ILOVEMRMEN'}
28th August 2012:
I read this all at once, sorry if i did not write reviews but i was reading on my phone so i was really hard. But basically i want to say that i love your story so far. I can honestly say that it is the most diffrent ScoRose fanfic i have read. I love the way you have not rushed it like many others the way you tool your time it is amazing. Aswell as the style you write in. Please update soon!
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{reviewid: 2732733, reviewer: 'Rosabella'}
19th August 2012:
OH MY GOD! updateupdateupdateupdate!!! I'm dying to see what happens next :D
p.s. update
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{reviewid: 2732295, reviewer: 'simply_SiriuS'}
17th August 2012:
Please update soon! I'm so addicted to this story, it's crazy!!!
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{reviewid: 2731407, reviewer: 'EverJKFaithful'}
14th August 2012:
He he! I can only guess who this is! Best chapter yet, really beginning to enjoy this story now.
Lovely time-turner episode :) Overall you're writing in this chapter is really good. Rose seems less of a bitch now and more like a character I can relate with :)
On to the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 2731405, reviewer: 'EverJKFaithful'}
14th August 2012:
Scorpius is a complete arse!? Seriously! Though, ha, it was nice to see snobby Rose get put in her place. I must ask whether or not 'Zane Zabini' will pop up again as I am quite enjoying his snarky Slytherin demeanor.
Top tip - go back through your chapters! Don't get me wrong the story is awesome, it just needs a once over with a feather duster before you submit it.
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{reviewid: 2731399, reviewer: 'EverJKFaithful'}
14th August 2012:
Another good chapter. I liked Rose a lot more in this one, I'm learning to enjoy her bluntness.
One of my favorite lines - "Have you asked him about his new toy?”
“What he plays with is none of my business”, I replied.
“It is when the dolly is a modelled after you”. - I love Chrissy! Totally mental!
Only saw a little of Scorpius in this chapter... :( Maybe will see more of him in the next?
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{reviewid: 2731291, reviewer: 'EverJKFaithful'}
14th August 2012:
I quite enjoyed this chapter. At the moment I have no love for Rose :( She seems a little stuck up and rather obstinate. But I'm sure that as this is the first chapter the character development will improve and we will find out more about her. General description is good and I like Chrissy Weed, she seems like a very interesting sidekick.
In short I got recommended this by a friend :) Just going through all the chapters and leaving behind my thoughts.
She said the Scorpius you'd written was high up on her 'to do list' - so of course I just had to check it out ;)
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{reviewid: 2729593, reviewer: '%3B%29'}
9th August 2012:
Holy crap! Oh my God!
You have to update soon!
Please I will cry if you don't. No joke.
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{reviewid: 2729390, reviewer: 'krista'}
8th August 2012:
I am so happy you are back. I love this story so much. Hope you update soon.
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{reviewid: 2728849, reviewer: 'luvharrypotter'}
7th August 2012:
w.o.w when r u gona post d next chap?
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{reviewid: 2728348, reviewer: 'phoebe_s'}
6th August 2012:
I am VERY glad you're back it's been FOREVER. Love the chapter, hope you'll update soon this time!
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{reviewid: 2728243, reviewer: 'TheHallow'}
5th August 2012:
I LOVE this story! I am OBSESSED!!! Truly!! Keep going please? I want more! :D It's is so awesome! The story line, the ideas, the imagination!! The fact that they keep going back in time is so cool! What an awesome idea!!
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{reviewid: 2728015, reviewer: 'rachelboo'}
5th August 2012:
A kiss!???!! A kiss between Rose and Scorpius but not actually Rose and Scorpius, a pair of wacked up hormonal ghosts!? You are cruel. He he. I cannot wait to hear what Malfoy has to say about this when he goes back to normal. Love the detail for that room by the way, knew something spooky was going to happen the minute R and S walked in. Please please please never leave it that long to update again, i might just die ;)
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{reviewid: 2728013, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
5th August 2012:
Oh my goodness, a run in with Lily and James, now that was fun. Now a run in with Jack and Belle, nothing like being posessed by a pair of horemonal teen agers. Maybe that door was locked for a reason. Atleast Rose knows and is aware that the ghost is there in her body, it didn't push her out. maybe Rose will have enough control to get them out of there before things get too out of hand?
Very good chapter, so happy your story is back, you were missed :)
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{reviewid: 2727534, reviewer: 'shez'}
3rd August 2012:
I really hope you update soon. I'm not one who reads much fanfiction but this is really good. uh oh..Snape. Yikes! Hopefully 'Spots' and Scorpius can pull it together long enough to get out of this mess. Also, I love the amount of attention you put into crafting their conversations and you make every word count, instead of us having to plow through incessant details. I wonder how ScoRose is going to happen here, because it seems to me like Scorpius despises her on principle but find himself drawn to her nevertheless. And Rose is just amazingly smart (I love smart characters). I love her snarkiness and cunning. She's developed so well. So is Scorp, whose way of thinking from his backstory and childhood is understandable. Anyway, I'll stop rambling but I hope you read this review and it inspires you to update soon!
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{reviewid: 2724587, reviewer: 'Lucy'}
| Review #19, by Lucy | Spots |
26th July 2012:
WOWOWOW! I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter :D Please update soon, I'm so excited to see how all this unfolds :)
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{reviewid: 2720930, reviewer: 'Ellena.'}
| Review #20, by Ellena. | Spots |
17th July 2012:
Oh gosh. I'm literally dying. This chapter is fantastic. Spots? Nice code name there. :) I cannot wait to see what comes next.
I love Scorpius' character, he's confident as hell, sexy too. URGH.
Please update soon, for the sake of my sanity!
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{reviewid: 2692942, reviewer: 'Marianne'}
| Review #21, by Marianne | Spots |
3rd May 2012:
Please continue this! It's awesome! Please!
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{reviewid: 2688872, reviewer: 'luvharrypotter'}
| Review #22, by luvharrypotter | Spots |
23rd April 2012:
awwwsum story! when will you be updating the next chapter? i hope its fast!
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{reviewid: 2688199, reviewer: 'Galini'}
| Review #23, by Galini | Spots |
21st April 2012:
OMG, OMG, OMG, PLEASE I BEG YOU, UPDATE! And put a ScorpiousXRose hint. Just a tiny bit.
Anyways, I totally love this story. You sure are one of the best writers here, writing a complicated story like that and not ruining any bit of it, as often I find myself realizing in other stories here.
I really hope you will write many chapters more, for I wouldn't bear seeing myself finishing this story. You've got such a talent, and using it in a great way. Keep doing like that!
Update soon,
Galini
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{reviewid: 2681128, reviewer: 'BOO'}
4th April 2012:
Hey! :) Love the plot. And how can one not find Scorpius sexy!!? Mysterious is usually sexy :p
The one thing Scorpius can do to Rose? He can wind her up completely. Na-ice :p
Anyhoo, update soon!
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{reviewid: 2679183, reviewer: 'Rebekah'}
30th March 2012:
Really really good. I've never read fan-fiction before, and my friend had recommended your piece to me. There are a few spelling errors, but also signs of a brilliant imagination. Thank you for sharing! :)
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