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Review #1, by ray Chosen

8th September 2011:
so cute! It made me think of an adoption home at first, I thought perhaps the narrator was a girl who was waiting to be adopted and found out she was a wizard, although certain things alerted me, like talking as soon as she (it?) was born, and finding its "One" seventy years after birth. So I was a bit shocked when I read the ending, but pleasantly surprised! Though I think you could go into more detail about how the wand chooses the wizard, because you mentioned a lot of the wands going "pick me!", but if the wand chose the wizard then why would the wands need to say pick me? very interesting concept though, what a nice read.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am working on a rewrite based on suggestions from the reviews. I am so glad you were suprised by the ending. That's what I was going for.

Again, thank you for the review. :)


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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 Chosen

4th September 2011:
What an interesting concept, a story from the wands prospective of choosing it's first owner. Well written. 10/10.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. This was a fun piece to write. Thanks for the 10/10 :)

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Review #3, by Singularity Chosen

4th September 2011:
Interesting idea. I don't know that I've ever read a story from the perspective of a wand before. It would be interesting to see a bit more detail, especially in regards to how the wand knew when its "one" walked in.

Author's Response: It was am idea from my wife and I ran with it. I will look into developing the wand's knowing of it's "One".

Thank you for the kind review.


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