O.o I hope James dumps Holly very soon, because poor Lily is only just figuring out her feelings for him, it will soon turn to love...i know it! Poor Lils but poor James because he is only doing that because of what Lily said. She didn't really mean it! Gah! I think I over think things waaay too much!

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thats my birthday! 10th September! Best chapter ever! But poor Remus for having to go through the full moon!

Author's Response: Thankyou :) x

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Aww poor lily ... she only has herself to blame though x
post soon x

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Awesome chapter!
Love the arrival of the passage way!
Cannot wait for the party! xx

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I'll try and get it up as fast as I can for you x

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Awesome Chapter :D x

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hahahahahahaha THIS IS AMAZING! Sirius is so funny! i feel bad for remus but i love sirius. KEEP UPDATING!!

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it, I love Sirius but I wasn't sure I had done him and the chapter justice but you have made me feel much better about it :) x

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Loved this chapter with passion, it's brilliant :D xx

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I really wasn't sure whether I liked this chapter or not but you have reassured me. x

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So COOL!
So that was why Lily did not agree to James' nagging in the first place!
Nice WORK!

Author's Response: Thankyou :) it took me ages to work out a decent reason why! xx

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More More More! Please write more! Amazing!

Author's Response: Thankyou :) I'm sorry it takes me so long between chapters x

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Awesome :D x
Love it :D x

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Hey first of all this story is amazing! Keep it up:) Also how do you get the spacing to be normal, on my story it keeps putting like 4 spaces between every paragraph

Author's Response: Thanks :) When I preview it and it says I can save it, I get rid of all the extra paragraphs it gives you and then save it. Every time you preview it in the chapter editing sectioning, it gives you extra paragraphs so if you get rid of them and then save it, there shouldn't be any. Thanks for reviewing :) x

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Fantastic chapter, love the connection and exceptance of the group x

Author's Response: Thankyou, I was really worried about getting this chapter right :) x

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Why doesn't this have reviews?! People can't tell good stories nowadays. Everything is seriously perfect about this story. I fell for the title at first but now I am so glad to have read it up to now. Will be waiting patiently for the next chapter. Your faithful reader,
clemonpink

Author's Response: Thankyou! I hope the rest of the chapters meet your expectations! x

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I just can't get over the fact that your words flow so perfectly together! And because of it this feels like the real thing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the compliment :) x

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Amazing detail in the descriptions of James and Sirius. It's a beautiful beginning that came true in my mind because of your words. I think I've finally landed on something really worth reading.

Author's Response: Thankyou I love the characters of Sirius and James which makes it so much easier to write about them. I'm glad you've enjoyed it! x

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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!


Author's Response: Oh my God thankyou! Just made my day, I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

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